ickplant@lemmy.world to Lemmy Shitpost@lemmy.world · 5 days agoHello therelemmy.worldimagemessage-square14fedilinkarrow-up11arrow-down10
arrow-up11arrow-down1imageHello therelemmy.worldickplant@lemmy.world to Lemmy Shitpost@lemmy.world · 5 days agomessage-square14fedilink
minus-squaresnf@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up0·5 days agoIt doesn’t scan. But it’s not bothering me. Nope not at all. Not in any way annoyed by the fact that there’s one too many syllables in the second verse. Only a complete pedant would get HUNG UP ON THAT RIGHT HAHAHAHAHA
minus-squareZwiebel@feddit.orglinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up0·5 days agoYou can cope with that by dropping a syllable, like “t’fast”
minus-squaresnf@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up0·5 days agoYeah, it could be rephrased a little as well, like “guess I stood up too fast again”
minus-squareAngryCommieKender@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up0·5 days agoSecond line. The whole thing is an excerpt of the first verse. The chorus isn’t for another couple lines.
minus-squaresnf@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up0·5 days agoI was actually wondering about that but was too lazy to check. Thanks for the correction
It doesn’t scan. But it’s not bothering me. Nope not at all. Not in any way annoyed by the fact that there’s one too many syllables in the second verse. Only a complete pedant would get HUNG UP ON THAT RIGHT HAHAHAHAHA
You can cope with that by dropping a syllable, like “t’fast”
Yeah, it could be rephrased a little as well, like “guess I stood up too fast again”
Second line. The whole thing is an excerpt of the first verse. The chorus isn’t for another couple lines.
I was actually wondering about that but was too lazy to check. Thanks for the correction